Including nonfiction elements within historical fiction does not detract from the story—it enhances it. It provides an outlet for curiosity and gives deeper meaning to the characters and their experiences.

Something is sentimental when it exaggerates a feeling and becomes falsely emotional or inauthentic. This often happens when a writer relies on an assumed emotional response from a reader by, for instance, describing a marriage as happy or a funeral as sad. Not all marriages are happy and not all funerals are sad, and each will be viewed differently from different perspectives.

Free indirect style is a powerful literary device that emerges readers deep within the mind of a character. When done effectively, it blends the voices of the narrator and the character making them seem like one-in-the-same. By using free indirect style and engaging readers in the mind of the character, empathy is created which ultimately leads to an emotional response.