The Art of Description with Eric Z. Weintraub
In this Prologue Day session, novelist Eric Z. Weintraub (South of Sepharad) explores how to bring historical scenes to life on the page. Going beyond “show, don’t tell,” he demonstrates practical techniques for turning research, observation, and sensory detail into immersive, emotionally resonant settings. Using examples from Cormac McCarthy, Stephen Crane, Patrick Süskind, Edward P. Jones, Gabriel García Márquez, and Maggie O’Farrell, Weintraub shows how description can reveal character, convey mood, and ground readers in unfamiliar historical periods without overwhelming them with exposition.
You’ll learn how to:
Avoid vague description and clichés that flatten historical scenes
Use the five senses to layer rich, concrete detail
Reveal character and emotion through what they notice and how they perceive the world
Turn research—maps, cookbooks, archives, on-site visits, YouTube, and Google Maps—into memorable images
Identify common pitfalls in description, including stage-like blocking, overused facial cues, blueprint-style building notes, and lazy onomatopoeia
Balance sensory prose with pacing so description enhances, rather than slows, your story
Practice description-focused exercises to sharpen observation and scene-building skills
Whether you’re drafting your first historical novel or refining a mature work, this session provides clear, actionable tools to make your historical settings vivid, authentic, and emotionally resonant.